I sense that you want to communicate the 'rock and roll' aspect with the chosen image but consider how this represents both the artist and the audience response. The lead story is confusing- is the band The AWakening or Allpress? Communicate this more clearly to the reader. The main thing to work on is the size of the font linked to the purpose- don't overcomplicate and vary it if not necessary.
I sense that you want to communicate the 'rock and roll' aspect with the chosen image but consider how this represents both the artist and the audience response. The lead story is confusing- is the band The AWakening or Allpress? Communicate this more clearly to the reader. The main thing to work on is the size of the font linked to the purpose- don't overcomplicate and vary it if not necessary.
I sense that you want to communicate the 'rock and roll' aspect with the chosen image but consider how this represents both the artist and the audience response. The lead story is confusing- is the band The AWakening or Allpress? Communicate this more clearly to the reader. The main thing to work on is the size of the font linked to the purpose- don't overcomplicate and vary it if not necessary.
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